The most essential component of a person's life is his or her time at the workplace, and life turns meaningless once no job satisfaction is obtained. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is a well-established fact that the most indispensable element of a human's life is time spent at the workplace. Besides, job satisfaction is also an essential factor of life. From my perspective, I totally agree with this view.
To begin with, it is apparent that the amount of time allocated for working at the workplace is relatively important. This is because in this day and age people spend a large number of hours at their working place. In fact, according to the Medium article, the average American spends nearly 8 hours working in the workplace. Furthermore, it is estimated that the figure for time spent for this purpose will be 90,000 hours over the course of a lifetime. As this example has shown, normal people have a tendency to spend nearly 1/3 of their life at work. For this reason, the time at the working place has a big impact on each person’s life.
In addition, it is undisputed that no job satisfaction results in a worthless life. In reality, according to the research of Near in 1984, job satisfaction is a component of life satisfaction, job satisfaction predicts life satisfaction over the same period of time. Moreover, researchers whose names are Diener and Tay in 2012 illustrated that job satisfaction is a key indicator of workers’ well-being. As a consequence of this, it is obvious that job satisfaction is extremely important in life.
Take all the aforementioned points into consideration, it may be concluded that both time allocated for working place and job satisfaction are influential with a person’s life. As a result, I wholly advocate with the view that the most integral components of life is working place time and job satisfaction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, in addition, in fact, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94385964912 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12655796806 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498245614035 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4923465928 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311131654795 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124612749474 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810475514631 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212412383539 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623626680889 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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