The most essential component of a person's life is his or her time at the workplace, and life turns meaningless once no job satisfaction is obtained. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that human’s life satisfaction depends on how fulfilled people feel about their job as they spend most of their time at work. While I accept that successful work performance can bring us happiness, I strongly disagree that life would be insignificant if people do not feel satisfied with their job.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that most of people’s daily time is at the workplace so their emotion can be easily affected by how well and smoothly they carry out their work. Besides the financial reward, claiming high social status at work is one of the most important achievement to some individuals. Those are what is the meaning of life for them when their lives revolve around work.
On the other hand, I believe that satisfying working life is not the only standard to define the meaning of a person’s life. Apart from working life, people have many other aspects to work for, from the closest family life to further social volunteering activities. For some, they achieve the sense of fulfillment when their children growing up becoming good citizens. Some people enjoy their life when they kindly help others, especially the vulnerable and handicapped. Therefore, what is the meaning of their life is up to their personal viewpoint and it can have nothing to do with their job satisfaction.
In conclusion, some people can work out the meaning of their life through satisfying work, but others can also obtain that from other activities depending on personal choices.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... On the one hand, it is undeniable that most of people’s daily time is at the workplace so the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98015873016 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6516340983 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551587301587 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2097351722 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.090909091 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200644173628 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958560529227 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485016754569 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138604304285 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040151650377 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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