New parents should attend parenting courses to bring up their children well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that more and more people sign parenting courses before or on pregnancy so that can be capable of raising the newborns healthily. I totally agree that new mothers and fathers should take part in those course as they would do good to both parents and children.
To begin with, new parents can lack both knowledge and experience about the parenting situation they are coping with. When it is the very first time women and men become parents, they have tons of lessons to learn to bring up their first children such as what kinds of milk are good for their health or how to bathe the babies correctly and so on. As brand new parents, there are many situations happening which they do not expect or are prepared enough for. Moreover, because they have not done it before, new mothers and fathers have zero experience on how to raise a child properly, consequently, they may not react fast when need to or even worse, they make mistakes. As newborn babies are extremely fragile and vulnerable, they need to be cared about with much love and attention, therefore, parents’ small mistakes can affect the child greatly.
Secondly, parenting courses are designed professionally to help parents to gain knowledge about both the child and the parents’ physical and mental health. The mothers learn how to take care of themselves as well as the babies the right way while the fathers learn how to take care of them both and gain love from them. Physical health aside, on and after bearing children, women can easily fall to depression so they truly need their other half to encourage and keep an eye on them so that parents can both overcome the hardship of being parents for the first time. This can strengthen the parents’ love towards each other as well as the family close relationship. Besides, when join the parenting courses, the mothers and fathers can make some friends who are trying to handle the same things as them. Those friends can help them find out solution for the problems they face with or simply be an ear for them to share their feeling through talking and give them strength.
In conclusion, I believe that taking part in parenting courses should be encouraged because these can widen the parents’ knowledge and experience so that they can grow their children physically and mentally healthy.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79104477612 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41004596973 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497512437811 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.830519852 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.571428571 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7142857143 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2857142857 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272082867928 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112054740545 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793001089634 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19823899357 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404977570793 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79104477612 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41004596973 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497512437811 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.830519852 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.571428571 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7142857143 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2857142857 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272082867928 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112054740545 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793001089634 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19823899357 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404977570793 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.