Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others believe that they cannot always expect job satisfaction, and a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views about the importance of the job satisfaction and security. While some lean towards guaranteeing a stable job, I strongly believe that satisfying working life is equally essential.
There are several reasons why keeping your job permanently is extremely necessary. Firstly, people all need work to gain regular income so that they can afford themselves and their family to maintain their lives. It is clearly exposed along with the COVID19 pandemic while millions of workers become unemployed and they have to depend on the government’s support. Secondly, when having a secured job, working adults are not under pressure to devote their life to the work and try too much that can affect their physical and mental health. They have time to spend with their family or enjoy the social life outside workplace.
On the other hand, I can understand the loud claim that a satisfying job should be seriously considered. One of the main reason is that performing amazingly at work can bring back financial reward as well as higher social status at work to the employees. Those workers overcoming challenging situation by their hard working attitude and creativeness will easily be regconised by the supervisor, therefore, they can be appointed to a promotion opportunity and move up their career ladder. In addition, achieving the goal of work can develop the individual’s self-esteem and boost their confidence so that they can obtain the sense of enjoyment and appreciate themselves better.
In conclusion, it seems to me that satisfying an individual’s job is as important as securing it stably.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26436781609 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90422466865 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613026819923 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9100180608 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213907455741 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101126198706 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0989992193837 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179376237066 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106824254349 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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