Some people say that arts subjects such as painting or drawing should not be made compulsory for high school students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that many high school around the world include arts like drawing, painting or sculpture as one of the subjects, both optional or compulsory course. While there are some arguments in favor of making arts subjects compulsory, I strongly believe that those should not be mandatory for students at high schools.
To begin with, I would argue that arts subjects may not for every students as arts usually come with talent. It means that some people is gifted to have artistic molecules in their blood since born while others cannot achieve this kind of talent all their life. Besides, arts usually come together with interest and passion as well. However, some students show no interest in drawing or painting courses as they are keen on some other subjects or activities. For example, the captain of the football team of the school do not want to attend arts class because he thinks that spending an hour to draw a picture is a waste of time while he can use that time to practice more on the field he loves.
Secondly, as art is one of the subjects, the teachers have to assess the results of the students taking part in the courses. However, it is difficult to set a discipline to grade the pupils’ art works and it heavily depends on the teachers’ personal view. Therefore, the students may not be satisfied with the marks when they think that the teachers do not understand their ideas on the paintings or how much they struggle to sing a song when they are tone-deaf. Moreover, if the arts class is compulsory, it can affect the school results of the students so they can feel unfair as they find it not really important for them to develop.
In conclusion, while that arts subjects are helpful for children to grow up mentally well, I believe those subjects should be optional so that they will not put more pressure on students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66360856269 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42402536311 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525993883792 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.025832034 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.083333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.75 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306536721677 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110176246985 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627880672885 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19151899728 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612775394941 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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