People have always been playing strenuous life threatening sports for name and fame or for huge bundle of money or for self-esteem. I also want to stand in favor with the people who assert that such sports encourage particularly younger generation to be more active and explore every colors of life.
To begin with, most often adventurous sports are organized prudently to minimize possible tragedy by abiding with all the safety procedures and precautions beforehand. Therefore, undoubtedly such games are safe to participate. Furthermore, sports such as Spanish bull fighting, Formula One racing,...
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'People have always been playing strenuous life threatening sports for name and fame or for huge bundle of money or for self-esteem.'
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