Some countries' residents prefer to have their own house as a significant goal than renting it. This essay will be discuss this circumstance and give my opinion.
In asia , People believe that owning a home is a way to identify their social status in society which can fulfill their achievement and ability to build a family. Regarding the cultural background, asia countries believe that a house is an asset which can prove their ability on earning money. The more houses they obtain, the higher status they reach. In addition, most asian believe that owning a house is a basic requirement when they get married. If a man did not have the ability to own a house which means they can not take care of himself, say nothing for a family. Therefore, in asia, buying a house is a necessary trend for most residents.
I believe that owning a house is beneficial for two reasons. Firstly, you can decorate the house with your wish. There is no restriction to change the decoration on your own house, so you can design the interior as you wish. Moreover, you will not have to worry about moving home regularly when your landlord is selling the property. Secondly, this is also a way of saving when house price increase. Due to global population increasing, house rents are increasing rapidly. Nowadays, paying the mortgage can equal the renting fee, so why do you pay the mortgage for your landlord instead of yours. I believe this is a positive trend because there is no restriction when you stay at your own home.
In conclusion, some countries, like Asia, prefer to purchase their own properties than renting. Not only that is a way of investment but also to prove their financial ability for their family. I believe this is a necessary trend for people to have their own house.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...umstance and give my opinion. In asia , People believe that owning a home is a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74846625767 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56404466018 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496932515337 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6685290538 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.4 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164652951056 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571617951106 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402344557503 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11122882668 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441573463981 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...umstance and give my opinion. In asia , People believe that owning a home is a ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74846625767 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56404466018 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496932515337 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6685290538 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.4 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164652951056 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571617951106 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402344557503 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11122882668 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441573463981 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.