Food is an important source for human beings and we can’t survive without it. Some people believe that countries should have abilities to produce their own grain in order to feed their residents, while others think that is unnecessary. I believe that there are several reasons why nations should produce their own sources for their citizens.
On the one hand, Autarky is important to a country if they want to become a wealthier country. Firstly, they should have it’s own agricultural industries in order to feed the whole country’s residents. This also benefit to their economy, which mean they can export their products to others who can’t produce their own food. For example, Singapore and Hong-Kong is known to be the international trade nations, so they have to rely on import foodstuff from other countries.
However, there are several measures will cause the food shortage if it couldn’t import from another country. For example, the Covin-19 has forced many countries decided to close their borders in order to block the virus, but it caused the importation of food can not deliver the goods off to other countries. Furthermore, extreme weather has caused significant damage in agricultural industries which means one day the world will have to face in food shortages. Therefore, countries that can produce their own food are necessary trends.
In conclusion, there are several impacts can cause the shortage in food industries, therefore, I believe that countries should produce their own food not only to feed their citizens also prevent the food shortage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: IT_IS[13]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (=it is)?
Suggestion: its
...hier country. Firstly, they should have it’s own agricultural industries in order to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, while, as for, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22352941176 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63391070131 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4835752576 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250990316024 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112230399333 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522853563001 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187987071436 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432584270981 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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