The charts below show the distribution of the world's water and the use of water in three countries.
The given pie-charts detail the statistical information on the proportional rate of freshwater in the total distribution of global water. Also, the bar chart highlights the percentage usage of freshwater in three countries in the sectors of agriculture, domestic, and industry.
Looking from the overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the majority of the freshwater comes from ice and glaciers. Moreover, agriculture consumes the maximum proportion of freshwater in Egypt and Saudi Arabia, while the industrial sector is more prominent in Canada.
According to the given illustration, of the total world's water, the freshwater accounts for 3% and the rest is the saltwater. Further, about 7 out of 10 parts of the freshwater come from ice and glaciers as against only 1% surface water, and the remaining one-fifth is the groundwater.
Turning to the usage, nearly four-fifths of the water in Egypt and Saudi Arabia is used for agricultural services compared to just 10% in the domestic area and just below 10% in the industrial sector. In contrast, whilst nearly 80% of the freshwater is directed to the industrial section in Canada, merely 11% and 10% is consumed by domestic and agricultural sectors respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 310, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...industrial section in Canada, merely 11% and 10% is consumed by domestic and agri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36923076923 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1312469448 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558974358974 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.7988785029 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 130.875 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.375 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204359236791 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863831597166 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739132190763 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118452282177 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859307312704 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.06136585366 126% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 40.7170731707 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.