Some people think it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others however believe that boys and girls benefit more from mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Educating children is an inevitable role for all the parents. A part of them consider that it is acceptable and fruitful if both male and female learn in same academic institute whereas others are contradict to this opinion. Although single sex schools are beneficiary, I prefer schools which have both the sex are significant for the present generation.
To start with, educational institutions are the place where students are trained to face the external world. The people they learn with should not be only with their own sex as the scenario differs completely in the world of adults. They should be trained physically and mentally to face challenges in their upcoming days for which they have to learn to live with all situations. Co-education provides this platform where students learn and also prepare themselves for the changing environment and socialize with the people which in turn make them a better person overcoming all the obstacles in their lives. For an instant, if a child is administered in an unisex school, he or she will understand how to manage and tackle problems and maintain a balanced life bravely irrespective of sex.
To continue with, however the single sex schools are safe and secured, children fail to adapt the situation once they complete their academics. Exposure of the child is greatly affected which may result in loss of confidence and increasing depression and also their feel of hesitation to socialize with their opposite sex . Adding to that, their radius of friends reduce unlike the co-educating institutions where the students have opportunity to befriend a lot . They also feel harder to assimilate in the future. Most importantly girls who study in these situations sometimes fail to achieve their goals because of the inferiority complex towards their opposite sex.
To conclude with, In my opinion, studying in unisex schools have various exposures and increased confidential level along with their academic knowledge . Children learning in a place where there is a single sex , although have secured environment, may strive hard to adapt the changing atmosphere in their future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25947521866 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80522053758 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542274052478 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3403071311 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.266666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101603339009 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384970967511 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324574553871 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722394060919 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349841734026 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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