It is true that, in this contemporary era, traveling is being popular among many people. Many individuals introspect that students must go abroad for learning new language and customs. However, in my consideration, it is a beneficial way for students to learn everything about different nation.
To start with, there are numerous examples behind this. Firstly, when students go any abroad country so they would know more things about their culture because when they would live there and speak in their native language so they can learn easily. Moreover, they would able to collect more information and their all things would highly reliable. For example, if people would go abroad so they will have to learn some basic words for communication with retailers so they would learn easily as compared to read books and so on.
Looking at the other view, nowadays we do not need to go anywhere for collecting information about any country. In addition, people do not have more time these day for spending their time on wasteful things. Almost all people prefer internet for learning any language or about customs. Facebook, instagram, skype e.t.c so many apps are available in which people can easily talk with any native people without any problem as well as this is free. For example, Wiis very good web page on internet and it provides all the information about biography of any person, fashion, culture and so on. In just one click.
Another example is YouTube. It is also a better option because all native speaker post their videos on youtube and all stuff are free. Furthermore, we can also learn here and we do not need to pay our single rupees as well as it is convenient way.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly more platforms are available in which people can read and know all things in free yet. We must understand that if, students go in any abroad country so it is good and their all Information are highly reliable rather than internet or books.
- Some people think that to lead a successful life a university degree is important Others believe that this is no longer true nowadays Discuss both views and give your own opinion 67
- Giving lectures in auditoriums to large numbers of students is an old way of teaching With the technology available today there is no justification for it and everything should be done online Do you agree or disagree 78
- Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organization Why might this be the case What could be the disadvantages of being self employed 73
- Nowadays families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this Explain the reasons for this and discuss any possible effects it may have on society 84
- Giving lectures in auditoriums to large numbers of students is an old way of teaching With the technology available today there is no justification for it and everything should be done online Do you agree or disagree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
... addition, people do not have more time these day for spending their time on wasteful thi...
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Line 5, column 319, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ustoms. Facebook, instagram, skype e.t.c so many apps are available in which peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition, as well as, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8630952381 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51057852599 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505952380952 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4938945843 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7777777778 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61111111111 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117510696764 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042748007066 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433621209952 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759181737254 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364951588541 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.