It is true that, in this contemporary era, traveling is being popular among many people. Many individuals introspect that students must go abroad for learning new language and customs. However, in my consideration, it is a beneficial way for students to learn everything about different nation.
To start with, there are numerous examples behind this. Firstly, when students go any abroad country so they would know more things about their culture because when they would live there and speak in their native language so they can catch easily. Moreover, they would able to collect more information and their all things would highly reliable. For example, if people would go abroad so they will have to learn some basic words for communication with retailers so they would do industrious as compared to read books and so on. Furthermore, they would also able to give insightful suggestions to others.
Looking at the other view, nowadays we do not need to go anywhere for collecting information about any country. In addition, people do not have more time these days so they do not want to spend their time on wasteful things. Almost all people prefer internet for learning any language or about customs. Facebook, instagram, skype, youtube e.t.c so many apps are available in which people can easily talk with any native people without any problem as well as this is free. For example, Wikipedia is a very good web page on internet and it provides all the information about biography of any person, fashion, culture and so on. In just one click.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly more platforms are available in which people can read and know all things in free yet. We must understand that if, students go in any abroad country so it is better and their all Information are highly reliable rather than internet or books.
- In many countries traditional food is being replaced by international fast food This has negative effects on both families and societies To what extend do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as older houses in the local area Others disagree and say that local authorities should allow people to build houses in the style s of their own choice Discuss both view and give your own 78
- Some people say that sports play an important role in society Others however think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games what are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects 78
- In the future all cars buses and trucks will be driverless The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition, as well as, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95454545455 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60709231566 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525974025974 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8890901386 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.375 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105123644497 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399496914043 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442602679457 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787119806858 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394794000111 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.