Some people say a person’s success in adult life is the result of the way they brought up as a child by their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The definition of success is changed by people`s perspective. Some are of the notion that a person becomes successful by healthy parenting experience in childhood; Whereas a few think that success depends on other factors also. I too support this to a major extent. my opinion is explained and justified in the ensuing writing.
The foremost argument to justify my viewpoint is that only a family can provide a supportive environment for raising children. childhood is the most important part of an individual`s life. So, parents play a key role in the success of person. they can provide a healthy lifestyle which is essential to the development of physically and emotionally in the young age. Therefor, person`s adult life is consequence of childhood experiences.
Furthermore, the skill of personality development is learn through surrounding of family. Good parenting makes a child socialize person. To become successful that does not mean only by money but a person needs connection with society which they can learn by parents. In addition, as per research by queen`s university, about 80% of people who are brought up by nurture by parents are considered as a successful person in term of self-made, personality development, social bonding, relationship and financially.
However, I would not ignore the other side. there are other factor also contribute in success. For example, companionship of their friend`s group, hard work, personal attitude towards life, schooling, teacher`s involvement in their life and other more.
To sum up, it can be stated that the contribution of parents and family make a successful person, but success of person is not totally depend on it. there are more reality example of person who are not considered as a successful in their life because of many aspects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...k that success depends on other factors also. I too support this to a major extent. ...
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Line 1, column 272, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
.... I too support this to a major extent. my opinion is explained and justified in t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Childhood
...rtive environment for raising children. childhood is the most important part of an indivi...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ay a key role in the success of person. they can provide a healthy lifestyle which i...
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Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...the skill of personality development is learn through surrounding of family. Good par...
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Line 5, column 258, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion with society which they can learn by parents. In addition, as per research by...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...ver, I would not ignore the other side. there are other factor also contribute in suc...
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Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'factors'?
Suggestion: factors
... ignore the other side. there are other factor also contribute in success. For example...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, whereas, for example, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35517241379 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22858995592 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58275862069 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.1374265129 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2777777778 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72222222222 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299003193091 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899828355185 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613455596043 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168096759655 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433029934036 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.