Entertainment has always been of major interest for most of the people around the world to divert their mind from their hectic work schedule. Movies, in particular, has been famous among the masses, as the most sought after source of entertainment. While some say that films can be preferred to be watched on cell phones and tablets rather than visiting a theatre, others say that watching movies in the cinema is more enjoyable. In my opinion, it is convenient and cheaper to watch movies on mobile however, sometimes, going to cinema halls is no harm too and is an individualistic choice.
The advancement of technology and the higher availability of movie subscriptions have led to an increase in watching films on mobile and tablets. This facility has provided various advantages for people to watch films at their convenience. For instance, with a yearly subscription of Netflix, one can catch up with their favourite movies anytime and anywhere. In addition to convenience, one is also able to save a huge amount of money spent on premier seating in multiplexes. Moreover, individuals also get an option to pause and play in between the movie, whenever needed. As a result, more and more people are inclined to watch films on their smartphones and avoid going to the theatre.
Even though watching movies on mobile has several benefits, it has certain drawbacks too. The main disadvantage is to be able to watch in an environment without any disturbance which is rarely possible in a theatre. People prefer watching movies in cinema halls to be fully focused and involved during the telecast. Additionally, many opt for luxury multiplexes for an extravagant experience and comfort while watching a movie. Furthermore, watching movies in a theatre is the most looked forward option for youths to spend some time with their friends. Therefore, some people look forward to watching movies in a theatre.
To conclude, I strongly believe that there is no requirement to visit a cinema hall to see films, but, it moreover depends on an individual's choice of how they prefer to watch their source of entertainment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in particular, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04843304843 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90834773338 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535612535613 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6368762873 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.235294118 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6470588235 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.17647058824 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176836053389 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060371002703 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799548564355 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11728913405 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071164744262 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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