Some people believe that the world's increase in population is unsustainable and will eventually lead to a global crisis. other people believe that the world population increase is necessary and beneficial as it creates the growth of the world's economy and society.
discuss both these views and give your opinion
The population of the world is ever growing. For some time now , it has been a topic of debate where a section of individuals argue that the increase in human population would decrease the earth's wealth leading to crisis , whilst other believe that the elevating the population would improve the financial status of the world and their community.This essay intends to analyse both the perspectives. I , however, opine with the former view.
On one hand, the alarming raise in number of people is reducing the natural resources available and which in turn drag this world into a global crisis.There are no enough surplus resources like water and food through out the world to offer for the entire humans. For instance, due to overpopulation, many countries around the world are depending on other countries for supplies such as edibles, clothing , as they could not produce in their own nation.The people has to spend a lot for their daily needs ,thus the wealth and economy of the nation is being dragged down every time they import the products from other nation.
On the other hand, population is not evenly distributed throughout the world there are many nations around the globe are willing to increase their population in order to economically support their society, nation and the world. For example , countries like Canada are immigrating people to their country so that both the immigrant and the country are mutually benefited by all means.
To conclude, The damages caused due to over population outweighs the benefits.In my opinion it has reduced the resources around the world to a greater extend, and has made every individual's life miserable, resulting in global crisis.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, thus, as to, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12635379061 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69070200315 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563176895307 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.32122257 49.4020404114 233% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 177.5 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.625 20.7667163134 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.875 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322220384896 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141917753008 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095613320073 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188919137255 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657268788258 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.