City Council is planning to pull down one of the historic building in your town because they do not have funds to renovate it. As citizen , you don’t want it to happen. Write a letter to the city council and in your letter, say:
What is the importance of the building
Why should it be renovated
Suggest a plan to raise funds and maintain building in future.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter in regards to the demolition of a historical building near to my resident. it is a 200 year old premises with beauties of ancient time carved on it. I suggest to please try and preserve the establishment so that our coming generation can see the art from our history. we are also ready to provide you with any possible support in terms of fund raising, etc. to save the building.
The building is a 200 year old establishment and is one of the oldest in the city. Moreover, it is built with ancient architectural plan and is a perfect example of enriched history of the city. The premises can be kept as a monument of ansestorial generation and it will surely enrich the ethinicity of the city.
we can add the building in the list of historical monument of the city and can be added into the history lessons at the schools. In future, the schools can also plan a tour for its students to visit the building and learn about our history.
I have also, spoken with many people about this thought of mine, and they have also agreed to pay a monthly fee to preserve of this cultural display. All the individuals of the city can pay a minimal fee and that can be deducted from their monthly maintenance bill for the maintenance for the building.
I look forward to your supportful reply.
Your's faithfully,
Sweta
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...r or Madam, I am writing this letter in regards to the demolition of a historical building...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...istorical building near to my resident. it is a 200 year old premises with beautie...
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Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest pleasing'.
Suggestion: suggest pleasing
...eauties of ancient time carved on it. I suggest to please try and preserve the establishment so t...
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Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
... time carved on it. I suggest to please try and preserve the establishment so that our ...
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Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...ation can see the art from our history. we are also ready to provide you with any ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...y enrich the ethinicity of the city. we can add the building in the list of his...
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Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
...nto the history lessons at the schools. In future, the schools can also plan a tour for i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54251012146 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63825375852 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53036437247 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 350.1 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1682089551 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1428571429 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6428571429 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.71428571429 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135376764312 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464789576019 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388020912698 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0689450472022 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175072006722 0.0580467560999 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.