Write about the following topic
Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to.
How true is this statement? What can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience.
Nowadays, tourism plays a very important role in every country around the world. Although it makes the country more developed, sometimes it still has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to. In this essay, I am going to explore why tourism has many bad effects and the solution to address that issue, then give my aspects clearly.
It is undeniable that tourism has provided a source of income to promote profits for the country. However, it has some bad effects such as pollution, crowding, and so on. For instance, people tend to throw rubbish uncontrollably so this can make the infrastructure of tourist attractions fall down dramatically. Moreover, rubbish or plastic bags are thrown out causes marine creatures to die each year. In addition, some places are too crowded and noisy so that travelers do not have a lot of space to play, relax, or enjoy their lives.
Due to the above indication, it is apparent that reasonable measures should be declared definitely in order to lead a better result. Firstly, people should be aware of their behavior and reduce bad habits such as not littering or doing things that affect the environment. Furthermore, travelers should use eco-friendly products instead of plastic bags. Protecting is really necessary so people should change their lifestyles and join hands to preserve the environment.
In conclusion, tourism can bring some negative effects on the tourist area, it can make the environment worse. Therefore, I hope that people will change their behavior and lifestyle so that tourism can grow more and reduce bad effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, still, then, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10687022901 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75608464383 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599236641221 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.6910385193 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.5714285714 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327476982193 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102478915394 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825122652363 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20302128793 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0943239698243 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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