In the past people like to store knowledge in books However in the present we prefer to store knowledge on the internet Do you think the advantages overweight the disadvantages

In the era of internet when everything is easily accessible online, the study material for the students are also upstream on the internet however in old days the education system was confined to hard books. This essay outlines the advantage of the availability of the online study material over the offline material which make the knowledge system easily accessible and free of cost all around the globe.

In the earlier education system, the students were provided with the hard books to read and understand the subjects as the information were written and published for sale by the authors. This trend is totally changed after the evolution of the internet in the world as everyone started uploading the e-books and journals online. The availability of the electronic material is on the touch of the finger and any one can read and use the stuff in their own way. For example, the kindle app of amazon has listed all the different kinds of books in the online library and anyone can access the same with no boundation.
In addition to this, the cost of publishing the paper books is very high, in contrast to the eBook. Most of the eBooks are available free of cost in the internet which make students life much easier as they can save lots of money from their pockets. The knowledge provided is the same in very cheaper prices in online portals. For instance, the online library on IEEE and ibooks has very less subscription price hence everyone can avail the same after buying the subscription.
To conclude, the knowledge available in the internet is much cheaper and easy to access with similar depth of information as was available in printed books. In my opinion, the new approach of online teaching and material availability make the education system very simple for students to adapt.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in contrast, in contrast to, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86970684039 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53821391814 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469055374593 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.8104578146 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.583333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0926098454953 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389074453144 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302728498611 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0618096324373 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167398154368 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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