Global warming is the concerned raised now days and to act on this all cars that burn fossil fuels should be replaced by electric cars. I totally agree that electric cars should take over the market because of its low maintenance cost and are environment friendly.
Maintenance cost is the main parameter an individual will think while buying his car. Electric cars are the best option for consumers when comparing for Low maintenance cost. Once, the consumer purchased electric car they will get rid of many consumable item which are to be replaced in each regular maintenance service. Another factor is to look substitute for fossil fuel as the price is reaching its height every day. Cars with electricity give a big relief to consumers as they do not need to pay high price for the fuel. Cars operating with fossil fuel when scheduled for service each time their engine oil is to be changed, where as in electric cars no such requirement is there which make it suitable for low maintenance cost.
Now days each one of us is aware of the importance of being environment friendly. Electric cars play an important role while contributing towards environment. Electric cars do not burn fossil fuel which results no combustion gases are exhausted to the environment. Another key factor which makes electric car environment friendly is less noise pollution.
However, there are many more factors on which electric cars are more promising than cars with fossil fuel, but the main key factor are the low maintenance cost and contribution towards environment and are to be considered.
- Some people think that people should choose their job based on income in order to provide security for their family.Do you think money is an important factor when choosing a job?What other factors should be considered? 89
- Studies show that many criminals have a low of education For this reason people that the best way to reduce crime is to educate people in prison so they can ge a job when leave prison Do you agree or disagree 61
- Some people think that people should choose their job based on incomein order to provide security for their family.Do you think money is an important factor when choosing a job?What other factors should be considered? 67
- Some believe that modern technology is increasing the gap between rich and poor people while others disagree Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- In many places new homes are needed but the only space available for building them is in the countryside Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there What is your opinion about this 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 175, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hen comparing for Low maintenance cost. Once, the consumer purchased electric car th...
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Line 2, column 630, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...time their engine oil is to be changed, where as in electric cars no such requirement is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99622641509 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68915520448 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532075471698 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1278263387 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.846153846 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92307692308 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361479390928 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148855120411 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882312413473 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252457612403 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840043870795 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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