Differences between countries become less evident each year Nowadays all over the world people share the same fashions advertising brands eating habits and TV channels what are the advantage and disadvantages of this

Is it true that the world has turned into the global village. In fact, the people from the different parts of the world become more closer with each other and showing similarities in the clothing and eating habits. Although it it has some negative impacts but I personally think that the advantages are outweigh.
On the positive side, the major merit merit of this phenomena is that ,people nowadays are wearing the same type of clothes as a result the companies can earn much more by trading internationally. Similarly, eating habits are also quite same of the people around the world,which provided the opportunity to the food companies to establish their branches in the other part of the world. For instance, the Coca-Cola company belongs to Atlanta but branches can be found almost everywhere in the world.this is not only beneficial for a particular company but also for the individuals as it provided job opportunities. Further more the telecast of the TV shows around the world is a convenient wayto spread the culture information to the people from the different corner of the world. So one will not get the culture shock if he or she looking to move abroad.
However, the major reason why people consider it as a negative situation, the national identities are being loss such as culture and the language . Nowadays people more likely to follow the western culture as well as the English become as their main language which increase the gap between the attraction towards their own culture and mother tongue.
To conclude, it has some demerits but I I am still in the favour of that it is a positive development which provided chance to meet the new things and get knowledge about the different culture around the world.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'closer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: closer
...the different parts of the world become more closer with each other and showing similaritie...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: it
...he clothing and eating habits. Although it it has some negative impacts but I persona...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 304, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
...ersonally think that the advantages are outweigh. On the positive side, the major meri...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 33, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: merit
...eigh. On the positive side, the major merit merit of this phenomena is that ,people nowad...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 48, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...positive side, the major merit merit of this phenomena is that ,people nowadays are ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 70, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...or merit merit of this phenomena is that ,people nowadays are wearing the same typ...
^^
Line 2, column 273, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...uite same of the people around the world,which provided the opportunity to the food co...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ng loss such as culture and the language . Nowadays people more likely to follow t...
^^
Line 4, column 39, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: I
... To conclude, it has some demerits but I I am still in the favour of that it is a ...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, similarly, so, still, well, for instance, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85810810811 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67142384231 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533783783784 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.9474798161 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.727272727 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193100095117 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071504840691 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053975216692 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107791311154 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490089999747 0.056905535591 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'closer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: closer
...the different parts of the world become more closer with each other and showing similaritie...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: it
...he clothing and eating habits. Although it it has some negative impacts but I persona...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 304, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
...ersonally think that the advantages are outweigh. On the positive side, the major meri...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 33, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: merit
...eigh. On the positive side, the major merit merit of this phenomena is that ,people nowad...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 48, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...positive side, the major merit merit of this phenomena is that ,people nowadays are ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 70, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...or merit merit of this phenomena is that ,people nowadays are wearing the same typ...
^^
Line 2, column 273, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...uite same of the people around the world,which provided the opportunity to the food co...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ng loss such as culture and the language . Nowadays people more likely to follow t...
^^
Line 4, column 39, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: I
... To conclude, it has some demerits but I I am still in the favour of that it is a ...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, similarly, so, still, well, for instance, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85810810811 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67142384231 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533783783784 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.9474798161 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.727272727 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193100095117 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071504840691 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053975216692 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107791311154 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490089999747 0.056905535591 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.