Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion
When teenager finish school, they often choose whether to get a job or pursue higher education. While a number of people believe that working after school, i would argue that continuing to study at university.
On the one hand, getting a job is beneficial in some ways. Firstly, many adolescent want to earn money as soon as possible. In this way, they would become independent on their income, and be mature enough to afford a house or have a family. Secondly, a person who select a labour instead of learning higher may have promotions and a successful career. Since they went through difficulties to gain real experience and skills for their chosen career.
On the other hand, i believe that it is more advantageous for students to continue the studies. Academy qualifications are required in some professions. For instance, it is difficult to become a lawyer, a doctor without having the college certificate. As a result, they have opportunities to have a better job and deal a higher salary than those with fewer qualifications. Another reason is that higher education can help young people have a foundation of the life. studying at university gives them countless occasion to build strong relations especially with professors or expects at college who are able to write a recommendation letter to get a top job.
In conclusion, although both views certainly have some validity, it seems to me that it is better to continue their studies
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- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves Some people think it is good while others think there are disadvantages Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ople believe that working after school, i would argue that continuing to study at...
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Line 2, column 441, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to career'
Suggestion: to career
... experience and skills for their chosen career. On the other hand, i believe that it ...
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Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...heir chosen career. On the other hand, i believe that it is more advantageous fo...
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Line 3, column 466, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Studying
...g people have a foundation of the life. studying at university gives them countless occa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98760330579 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92926245195 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619834710744 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5279314825 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2142857143 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0920999211204 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340974473561 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398384605613 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0644070881372 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338099448701 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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