Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter,
give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre
explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community
describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes
Dear Sir,
This is with reference to the notice posted on 5th October to the notice board that sports and leisure center would be closed permanently from the coming month. I am writing this letter to bring to your notice the importance of the sports and leisure center.
The sports and leisure center has plenty of options for people of all ages. It has swimming pool, badminton court, chess board, carrom board, small amphitheater for cultural events and morning yoga and great seating arrangements for ladies of the society to have kitty parties. The kids of my family use the center to learn swimming and badminton and my mother and aunt daily use it for morning yoga. I, personally use, the center with my friends to play chess.
In my opinion, the center is very important part of the society. It provides everyone a break from their daily task. It also provides great recreational activities. The center provides a platform for everyone to come together as one and interact with each other and be part of each other lives. The sports facility of the center helps health conscious people stay fit without going to artificial gyms. It also provides a channel for young kids to exhaust their energy by being active in sports than sitting in front of the television.
I honestly feel that if the center is closed then it would only have negative impact on the local people. As the days are going by, we are moving more towards digital life and losing touch with nature and physical activity. It would eventually create a lot of mental and physical health problems. I hope that considering the points I have provided, the council will try to find a way to save the sports and leisure center.
Yours faithfully,
Molly Bakers
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 299, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...er and be part of each other lives. The sports facility of the center helps health con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, honestly, if, so, then, in my opinion, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 937.175257732 153% => OK
No of words: 301.0 206.0 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75415282392 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38170530731 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551495016611 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 290.88556701 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 7.0 0.824742268041 849% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9582217511 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1764705882 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64705882353 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163475418165 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556534164515 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679557624994 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950410551509 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542823412691 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.