Current years a great number of teens are deciding to study oversea.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this issue.
In recent years, students get used to dream about studying abroad. But there are some ups and downs of studying in different countries. This essay will discuss both sides of studying another states and points out important stages.
Studying abroad may give you better education and life experience. It also can learn new languages as well as culture of foreign countries. Furthermore, If student go abroad for studying they will communicate with foreign people and face up to new culture and destination. As a result, students will be able to not only more knowledge but also new data about strangers lifestyle. As well as, studying and living another state can expand peoples’ out look and they make friends there. In addition, one of my classmates went to Canada for studying oversea about two years ago. She always writes me about her new friends and education systems of the nation.
On the other hand, studying abroad has few disadvantages. A lot of students who went to a foreign country face to homesickness, because of being far from their family, friends and home. It leads to them sadness and depression. Another words, some people who go another country, often come back to their hometown because of finance.
In conclusion, studying in a different country is very good for teenager’s future life. If they return to their home during summer holidays. And then, they will not come across any problems. In addition, people who went outside can get a well paid job related to their job to their knowledge, experience and skills. Moreover, they can have a better future than other teens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'in other words'?
Suggestion: In other words
...t leads to them sadness and depression. Another words, some people who go another country, of...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s very good for teenager’s future life. If they return to their home during summer...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... have a better future than other teens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, well, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96282527881 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5959616472 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579925650558 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0827192913 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.2631578947 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1578947368 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.10526315789 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.08572281387 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0292400399569 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365016595511 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0558372338523 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384987818836 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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