Children are entrusted under the parents, guardian, or a particular community until they are matured enough to handle themselves. This is ubiquitous all around the world. However recently it has been identified by few researchers that people encourage young children to leave their parents as soon as they become adults. Presumably, the author insists on leaving their parents once they become a teenager. In my opinion, such emancipations should not be encouraged. Subsequently, the children can be put in a dire situation without their parents. Parents and children must be aware about the consequences of emancipation.
Firstly, Emancipation misguides a teenager in to the wrong path. They tend to lose their morality by getting diverted towards various malpractices. It is at this tender age that the children needs their parents the most. However, this is the age where they devalue their parent's affection towards them. They lose their temper easily. They avoid advises and take decisions on their own. It is at this age they are exposed to a plethora of good and bad options in front of them. Apparently, without a moral guide to choose the righteous path, they are vulnerable to all sorts of bad options.
Second keypoint is there is no fiscal support for children to lead an independent life. Obviously, they are dependent on their parents for the school or college fees,shelter,food,stationeries,clothing etc. Let us assume that a child gets emancipation and leads an independent life with a part time job. Roughly he can contribute to the school fees. It is way impossible to commensurate the financial support rendered by parents with what they earn from a part time job.
Furthermore to add, currently drugs have been a threat to the teenage community. Without proper inspections and guidance, children can get affected remarkably. For instance, Macaulay Culkin the renowned child actor,protagonist of the film"Home Alone" spent half his life in drugs which eventually too the toll of his health and radiance. Such children are then admitted to rehabilitation for the rest of their life wasting all the precious moments that they could have spent productively.
To recapitulate, Children cannot lead a happy,fun frolic life without the magic of their parents. Despite the fact that Children must be taught to handle situations independently, it is solely the responsibility of the parents to lead the path with morality and stability.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...his is ubiquitous all around the world. However recently it has been identified by few ...
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Line 4, column 166, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , shelter
...r parents for the school or college fees,shelter,food,stationeries,clothing etc. Let us ...
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Line 4, column 179, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , stationeries
... the school or college fees,shelter,food,stationeries,clothing etc. Let us assume that a chil...
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Line 4, column 289, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...on and leads an independent life with a part time job. Roughly he can contribute to the s...
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Line 4, column 456, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...d by parents with what they earn from a part time job. Furthermore to add, currently dru...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...h what they earn from a part time job. Furthermore to add, currently drugs have been a thr...
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Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , protagonist
...Macaulay Culkin the renowned child actor,protagonist of the film'Home Alone' spent...
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Line 6, column 46, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , fun
...capitulate, Children cannot lead a happy,fun frolic life without the magic of their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, so, then, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2072.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43580308159 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543367346939 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9102289528 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6923076923 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0769230769 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307122953566 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886812664313 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810999715412 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167288710881 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970142934529 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.