My essay
There are people who are of the notion that growth in the industrial sector is imperative for the solution of poverty. On the other hand, some people believe that industrial growth is causing environmental issues and its progress should be halted. In my opinion, it would be not prudent to halt the industrial growth just because it is causing problems in environment, instead we should focus on how to make industrial progress more environmental friendly.
There are two reason for the people to believe that industrial growth is important to solve poverty. First, when industry grow it create jobs which tranfers money to the lower echolon to the society. It brings a chance for the poor hard working people to improve their lives. Secondly, growth of the industrial sector improves the economy of the country. As the economy improves, it strengthen the government economically which allows the government to introduce more programs that would benefits the people who are living in poverty. Lets take the example of Europe, after theindustrial revolution its economy rapidly improved and europeans living standard elevated as well.
The people who say that industrial growth is harmful to the environment points to the fact that a large amount of industrail waste is being produced every year which effect human as well as animals. Industries are producing toxic wastes that they dump in water, burry underground and release in air. All three of these is harmful to the environment. Waste that is being dumped in water is killing small animals which casue the scarcity of food for human as well as large animal. When the toxic polutants are buried in ground, it contaminate the underground water making it unfit to drink and also make the soil unsuitable for harvesting. Polluted air released by the industries contain greenhouse gases which cause global warming.
I believe we need to find a middle ground between industrial growth and poluting the environment. Therefore, we should let the indutries grow to earn the benefits but we should also introduce strict laws which force the industries to findalternative ways to manage their toxic waste.
In conclusion, progress in indutries do benefit the poor people, however, we need to find way to minimize the harmful environmental effect of industrial growth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: creates
...e poverty. First, when industry grow it create jobs which tranfers money to the lowe...
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...w it create jobs which tranfers money to the lower echolon to the society. It bri...
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...th of the industrial sector improves the economy of the country. As the economy i...
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...he country. As the economy improves, it strengthen the government economically which allo...
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
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...ce more programs that would benefits the people who are living in poverty. Lets t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1999.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28835978836 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71684363315 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502645502646 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7671616861 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.055555556 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27777777778 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 30.0 4.38176352705 685% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0146802826732 0.244688304435 6% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00436942261564 0.084324248473 5% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0180155909673 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00405344382621 0.151304729494 3% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218284630406 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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