You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe what went wrong with the meal and service
suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant
Dear Mr. Smith,
Hope you are doing well.
I am writing this letter in regards to my last week visit to your restaurant. I am a marketing manager of TJX company, my boss and all the team members really enjoy your food and appreciate the service given by you, this is a reason that venue for all our meetings is your restaurant.
During the recent visit, scenario was totally different. We waited for almost 45 minutes to arrive the lunch at our table, although, order was placed prior to coming to restaurant. I completely understand that it was very busy on that day, but, I was not expecting that kind of service from you. After a long wait, food that was served to us was not hot and we were not able to relish it. I was really disappointed from the service and food and felt embarrassed as district manager of TJX was also invited for the lunch.
I expect that it should be the first and last time of my bad experience with you and request you that if you can provide some discount coupons to my team, so that, they should be interested to visit again and can enjoy the actual taste and service that you provide all the time.
Thank you for understanding my concern.
Regards,
Karamdeep kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 26, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...doing well. I am writing this letter in regards to my last week visit to your restaurant. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, well, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50226244344 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39372075652 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592760180995 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.3947776646 44.8134815571 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4545454545 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230559216415 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829464357449 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429420022495 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130264187266 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219634292645 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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