You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant.
The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe what went wrong with the meal and service
suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant
Dear Sir/Madam,
We always have a great pleasure and are eager to visit your restaurant that serves authentic dishes and finger licking food.So far we have an amazing experience.I am writing this letter to tell you that from the last couple of few visits,we are highly disappointed with the food and service as well.
On my recommendation,the group of members ordered mix vegetables and daal.To our surprise,vegetables were half cooked.None of us were able to eat properly as some part was very hard.Also we found that daal had a bad smell like if it was a stale.Also,the container was dirty.
The staff was not ready to accept when we made a complain about the same.Instead,they said no one else is complaining except us. A bad experiecnce overall. I hope during our next visit,there will be an improvement in the quality of food.It will be freshly cooked thoroughly and served in a clean continer.We would like to visit restaurant again if you give an assurance to take these things into consideration.
Hope you will do the needful and take corrective measures.
Yours sincerely,
Manish
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir/Madam, We always have a great pleasure and are ...
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...uthentic dishes and finger licking food.So far we have an amazing experience.I am ...
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...od.So far we have an amazing experience.I am writing this letter to tell you that...
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... that from the last couple of few visits,we are highly disappointed with the food a...
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... service as well. On my recommendation,the group of members ordered mix vegetables...
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...members ordered mix vegetables and daal.To our surprise,vegetables were half cooke...
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... mix vegetables and daal.To our surprise,vegetables were half cooked.None of us were able t...
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...ur surprise,vegetables were half cooked.None of us were able to eat properly as some...
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...eat properly as some part was very hard.Also we found that daal had a bad smell like...
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...eat properly as some part was very hard.Also we found that daal had a bad smell like...
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...hat daal had a bad smell like if it was a stale.Also,the container was dirty. The sta...
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... had a bad smell like if it was a stale.Also,the container was dirty. The staff wa...
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... a bad smell like if it was a stale.Also,the container was dirty. The staff was no...
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...ff was not ready to accept when we made a complain about the same.Instead,they said no one...
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...ce overall. I hope during our next visit,there will be an improvement in the quality o...
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...e an improvement in the quality of food.It will be freshly cooked thoroughly and s...
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...oroughly and served in a clean continer.We would like to visit restaurant again if...
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... corrective measures. Yours sincerely, Manish
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...ve measures. Yours sincerely, Manish
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03825136612 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24927608813 2.54303337028 128% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.72131147541 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.810013314 44.8134815571 258% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 131.714285714 76.5299724578 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 16.8248392259 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 2.54639175258 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175092789396 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064341112433 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464102435939 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953239363081 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357868755957 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 8.37731958763 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 70.7449484536 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 8.62886597938 324% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.