You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You went to tell him how you feel
Write a letter to your singer. In your letter
Say how you feel about his performance
Give details of your musical activities
Explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities
Dear Megan,
I am mark and I attended a concert last week which was held at sports stadium in our city.We, in particular me and my friend thoroughly enjoyed every activity during that event.Each one of you gave spectacular performance.I am writing this letter to express how mind-blowing your singing was.
I have started learning music since long along with my work schedule.My main interests are pop and jazz music.I am learning from one of the famous music maestro name Mr.Michael.I have my classes twice a week for 2 hours.In that,he teaches not only various forms of music,but also how to express myself with utmost perfection.
The best thing I would like to appreciate is you were so natural and your expressions were flawless.Next week, I am visiting London Hall to give my first audition and I am feeling nervous.From the newspaper,I came to know that you will also be there at same time.It would be really great if before my audition,you give me some valuable tips and suggestions.
Looking forward for your positive response and I am sure you will help me.
Yours sincerely,
Mark
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...ure you will help me. Yours sincerely, Mark
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, really, so, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90322580645 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81046555123 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.704301075269 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 16.3608247423 226% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.477596767 44.8134815571 311% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 182.4 76.5299724578 238% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 37.2 16.8248392259 221% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.6 4.34317383033 244% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273803287035 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146506277653 0.0766984524023 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547901035843 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156608350577 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590327937352 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 8.37731958763 241% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 70.7449484536 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 7.45979381443 221% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 8.62886597938 324% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 8.54432989691 197% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 8.15463917526 208% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.