You have rented a four-bedroom house, which you share with two other students. However, there are several problems with this house that need fixing. Write a letter to the estate agency. In your letter:
explain your situation
describe the problems with the house
say what you would like to happen
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have been living in your apartment since 2019 with my two other friends. I did not have any problems in the apartment until now. Therefore, I am writing to you to address some of the difficulties that my friends and I are facing in the apartment.
As you must be aware that our apartment consists of 4-bed rooms and a kitchen. It is quite spacious and comfortable for us to live in. However, there are some of the issues which I would like to elucidate. In the kitchen, some of the sockets are not working. Usually, we need to use a microwave oven and other kitchen appliances and we do not have sufficient sockets in working conditions. Apart from this, in the bathroom, tapes are not working as well. Therefore, It is really hard for us to cope up with our daily routines as it is time-consuming and disturbing.
Henceforth, I hope you would be able to understand our current situation and able to provide some help. I would like to request you to send any working professional to solve these problems. It would be highly appreciated if you could manage to look into this matter thoroughly and take appropriate action.
In anticipation of your prompt response at the earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Katherine Pierce
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...erefore, I am writing to you to address some of the difficulties that my friends and I are ...
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Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...e for us to live in. However, there are some of the issues which I would like to elucidate....
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Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ould like to elucidate. In the kitchen, some of the sockets are not working. Usually, we ne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, really, so, therefore, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75454545455 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8474433944 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4401166178 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.7333333333 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187977401969 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544087334844 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385164651222 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103957079991 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556845470922 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.