Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
I think capital punishment is a really serious punishment. I am not really sure if it is a good idea to end someone's life because of the crime they committed. But I also think there are serious crimes that should be punished more than arresting and putting them in prison. Such as types of murder, child abuse and terrorism.
Some psychopaths can not regret anything they have done. Prisons will not be enough for psychopaths because when they are released from prison they can commit any crime again. If any of these people are not punished with death, then we can say that our life is less secure. But I can not say that I am supporting capital punishment. Because I have doubts if it is ethic or not. Maybe there are any other ways to control violence. Yet also I agree that
capital punishment decreases the number of violence. The idea of dying if you commit any of these crimes, makes people stop. Therefore it will be safer if some of those criminals punished with capital punishment.
There are also bad sides of capital punishment. For instance, maybe some innocents would be punished with death, whereas some people had dyed to capital punishment even though they were innocent in the past.
In conclusıon, despite the fact that some people deserve capital punishment I am not certainly supporting the death penalty at all. Maybe people should not be punished with death I suppose. There should be any other ways to punish them such as sentence to life imprisonment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 126, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...any of these crimes, makes people stop. Therefore it will be safer if some of those crimi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so, then, therefore, whereas, for instance, i suppose, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76744186047 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51720836652 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492248062016 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.992138309 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.3333333333 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241831453978 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851305900976 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652299324388 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155064596774 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032285939075 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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