To some people studying the past has little value in the modern world. Why do you think it s important to do so? What will be the effect if children are not taught history?
Sadly, I agree that some people who are studying the past do not have the value that they deserve. Historical events are important because they give us information and knowledge about what happened in the past.
Having knowledge about the past makes it easier to understand some problems they had to deal with, and history reveals a lot of information about our ancestors which can be very useful. While working history we may develop a new range of skills. For example, we can learn how to analyse material, and how to do a basic search. Also, we might have to face some situations today that people have already faced in the past, and we can follow their solutions. Moreover, we may now know what to do, and what not to do when dealing with some of these problems.
Unfortunately, nowadays history is not something that takes attention. Thus there is a very little amount of people who are studying the past. It seems that in future children most likely to be not taught of history, in addition to that, it will cause big issues. Even though it is sometimes said that history never repeats itself, there is much in it which is relevant to the modern world. So we should more and more focus on history also, schools and colleges should be able to emphasize historical events and related subjects in order to help them to have a wider view of the world.
In conclusion, history not only teaches the facts but also gives insights about different ways of life, and gives tips on how to make better decisions about life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...our ancestors which can be very useful. While working history we may develop a new ra...
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Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... is not something that takes attention. Thus there is a very little amount of people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63468634686 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37571900583 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571955719557 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6738534236 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6153846154 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317322825283 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104173162685 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685934128991 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167826956845 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886048197029 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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