Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's world, the amount of working hours per day is a very important issue for workers since it directly affects how happy they feel in their life. While some people think it is more delightful to work longer hours a day for three days a week, others think it is more enjoyable to work shorter hours a day with five work days in a week. I, personally, believe that working three days a week for long hours leads to a more enjoyable life for us because of two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, working three days a week, you will have much more free time than you normally would have, and as a result, you can use this amount of time and enjoy your free time. Actually, you can do a lot of amusing activities such as meeting your friends, attending stadiums and also arranging a several days-long trip. having more fun in your life by the aforementioned activities, people will definitely have a more enjoyable time. Moreover, with a high-quality vacation, people will be more energetic and productive throughout the working days, hence, they will have a better performance in their jobs, becoming more satisfied of themselves which leads to a more delightful workplace for them. Consequently, they feel way better about their job and everyday life.
Secondly, because of the more free days you will have in a week by working just three days, you can easily pick a side profession or activity you like to do in order to enjoy your life more. Indeed, people tend to do a lot of activities beside their main jobs, but they cannot reach this purpose, due to the amount of time they have to dedicate to their main career in a week. For instance, I really love being a renowned pianist, but the problem is practicing the piano requires a lot of concentration which I do not have at the evenings after I come home from work. However, if I have some free days a week, I can practice at the mornings which I am so fresh and focused. As a result, I can professionally pursue my life-long dream and maybe become a famous pianist someday. This means that I can enjoy my life more if I can work longer for less three days a week for my main job.
To sum up, I think people will have more enjoyable life if they work longer hours per day for three days a week. In this way, they will have a much longer weekend which they can allocate to some fun activities they like, or maybe pursue a second profession of which they have always had dreamt.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Having
...lso arranging a several days-long trip. having more fun in your life by the aforementi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, i think, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2030.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46153846154 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45914719014 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435164835165 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 637.2 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.9439369863 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.875 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4375 20.6045352989 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.45110844103 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.442900918641 0.236089414692 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173776472293 0.076458572812 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119303192874 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305584841811 0.150856017488 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789010499507 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.1575268817 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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