2. You have just come back from San Francisco. When you were there, your friend Mr. Jackson gave you a great deal of help. Write to Mr. Jackson to thank him for his hospitality and help.
Begin your letter with : Dear Mr. Jackson,
Dear Mr. Jackson,
I am writing this letter to express my huge thanks for your hospitality and help during my visit to San Francisco.
It was very kind of you to set aside your precious time to show me around the city, though you were very busy with your new project. I was very impressed with the spectacular scenes of San Francisco: both high-rise buildings in downtown and peaceful field in rural.
Moreover, you not only took me to some restaurants that were usually patronized by locals but also helped me to connect with Ms. Jane, the owner of the Bizi restaurant. Thanks to this, I acquired much knowledge of the traditional cuisine of San Francisco which was very valuable for my assignment.
I lack words with which to express my gratitude to you. Please do not hesitate to contact me when you visit Vietnam. I hope you will give me the chance to return your kindness.
Yours sincerely,
My Nguyen
- Many people believe that healthy eating and the importance of healthy food should be taught in schools Others say that parents should teach their kids about healthy food and diet Discuss both views and give your opinion with relevant examples 56
- 2 You have just come back from San Francisco When you were there your friend Mr Jackson gave you a great deal of help Write to Mr Jackson to thank him for his hospitality and help Begin your letter with Dear Mr Jackson 89
- Nowadays in the society consumer goods are cheaper to buy Do advantages outweigh disadvantages 78
- Some people think that the government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects to make progress Do you agree or disagree 87
- In some cities the government has tried to reduce traffic by a congestion tax during rush hours Is this positive or negative 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 754.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68322981366 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56197439872 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645962732919 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.159144995 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7777777778 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343123062467 0.216113520407 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129524546928 0.0766984524023 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864096491594 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169043530903 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025308068449 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.