Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to Mr. Adam, who works for your company as a receptionist, for his kindness to help me out of a difficult situation.
Last Monday, while I was waiting for the bus 165 to commute to work as usual, I felt dizzy and could not breathe well. Then all of a sudden, I got unconscious and it was Mr. Adam, who was also standing next to me at the time, immediately sent me to the hospital. He also contacted my mother to inform her of the situation. I was told by the doctor that I was so lucky to be brought to the hospital in time. But when I came to, Mr. Adam had left for work, I still have not had a chance to express my appreciation to him.
Please help me to send Mr. Adam my gratefulness to his action. He deserved to be awarded. I guess that he might be late for work on that day because of my incident. If any problem happens with him due to this situation, please allow me to take my responsibility.
Once again, I would like to send him my great appreciation.
Yours faithfully,
My Nguyen
- Leisure is a growing industry but people no longer entertain themselves as much as they used to because the use of modern technology has made them less creative Do you agree or disagree 74
- Holding International games such as the Olympic Games is an exciting event Some people think it is positive while others argue it is waste of money Discuss both 82
- In some cities the government has tried to reduce traffic by a congestion tax during rush hours Is this positive or negative 89
- You need a translation of a document into a different language and you have a friend who speaks that language Write a letter to your friend In your letter Explain what the document is and why you need a translation Explain why this is urgent and important 73
- You are a commuter One morning on your way to work you suddenly fell ill and lost your consciousness One gentleman on the same bus sent you to a hospital Write a letter to the company where the gentlemen work to extend your gratefulness 87
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, well, while, as to, i guess
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.16826923077 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61548624661 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605769230769 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.649860046 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.25 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107531895612 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412234053313 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445088855023 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0590742845358 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050329646251 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.61 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.