Dear Sam,
I hope you are doing great in your life, both personally and professionally. I had my plate full of action items that I needed to prioritize and I apologize for not being able to communicate on my future plans before.
I had considered an opportunity overseas in Canada and I had a very short notice time available to report at the new company. I am currently working as a Flight Test Engineer with Bombardier Aerospace in their headquarters, Toronto.
This new job role is both challenging and thrilling as I get to fly along with the pilots and capture the real time flight data parameters, verify the behavior of systems from a customer's standpoint.
There is an opening in our department that I came across and I think you are going to be a great fit for this role. Profile of the job will be to develop and integrate the simulation environment for an upcoming version of the Bombardier's fleet of aircrafts.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely
Shyam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...mmunicate on my future plans before. I had considered an opportunity overseas ...
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Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...available to report at the new company. I am currently working as a Flight Test E...
^
Line 7, column 179, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
..., verify the behavior of systems from a customers standpoint. There is an opening in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75144508671 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89056644726 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647398843931 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7540297449 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3333333333 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170977368763 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818096739595 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849696034402 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851120376692 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060444659452 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.