The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of
France and India in 1984.
The given charts compare the population proportional rates further classified as males and females as studied under different age-groups in India, and France in the year 1984.
Looking from the overall perspective, it is readily apparent that over the period as a whole, the sex ratio in India remained the same, by contrast, more females than males were reported in France with aging. Also, during the given year, India reported a higher population rate than France across all the age-groups except the seniors.
According to the given illustration, nearly 6% fewer toddlers were reported in France as against 14% in India, with the same-sex percentage. Besides, although India witnessed a percent decline in the population rate while moving up in the pyramid(13.2% in 5-10, 12% in 10-15, and 11% in 15-20), the same experienced an erratic pattern in France, with 6 to 8% in 5-10, 8% in 10-20, and 7.8% in 20-25 respectively.
Furthermore, despite a continuous plummet in the Indian population(ranging between 10 to 4% from 25 to 70 years), France kept on fluctuating with more women than men. However, with the same gender ratio, India reported more than 4% old people(over 70), whereas France observed a dramatic dip in women's ratio, with 1 man behind 3 women.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, if, look, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08737864078 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86424222006 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611650485437 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.7698564335 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.714285714 112.824112599 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4285714286 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242849189668 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131041221112 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115293271323 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178480798487 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124315016322 0.0819641961636 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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