Some people prefer to play team sports while other prefer to play individual sports. Which do you prefer? Give examples and reasons to support your answer
Sport activity is beneficial for health. Although there are two kinds of sports, namely team sports and individual sports, according to me, I prefer team sports. In this essay, I would give some reasons to support my point of view.
Firstly, playing team sport allows you to share experiences to your teammates because you must work together on stage, to have some automatisms, to perform. Working together develops friendship. Each member can helps other members to perform against weaknesses. I remember when I was in elementary school, I played in the football team of our class. This experience helped me to know better each teammate than before because we took most time playing together on stage and officials matches. The best player of our team shared his secrets to help us to overcome our weaknesses and to give our best. The sharing was beneficial for each member of the team.
Secondly, playing team sport helps to share success and failure. In other words, when your team wins, the happiness or the success is for the team event though it is only one or two persons who help for the victory. However the victory is for the team. For example, on the 2018 FIFA World Cup Final in Russia.
In conclusion, I prefer team sport because it allows to work with other members of team and develops friendship. Moreover team sport allows you to share your pleasure and your pains with other members of the team.
- Some people prefer to play team sports while other prefer to play individual sports Which do you prefer Give examples and reasons to support your answer 60
- Some people prefer to play team sports while other prefer to play individual sports Which do you prefer Give examples and reasons to support your answer 60
- Some people prefer to play team sports while other prefer to play individual sports Which do you prefer Give examples and reasons to support your answer 60
- Some people prefer to play team sports while other prefer to play individual sports Which do you prefer Give examples and reasons to support your answer
- Some people prefer to play team sports while other prefer to play individual sports Which do you prefer Give examples and reasons to support your answer 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1977.66487455 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 245.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82448979592 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41491271379 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530612244898 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1139660959 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.875 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3125 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313116092138 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101872254034 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080029389304 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204873342837 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658678362263 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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