Nowadays, in some western country increasing ratio of husband and wife prefer to have no children in their lives because people ponder that they are more happy in their life is ubiquitous, across the globe due to its paramount importan.Although, the this topic has both merits and demerits also there. In my inclination will be justify in following paragraph.
To begin with , there are many advantages of couple choosing to have no children. Out of all, the one to prove strongest point that, without children couple can focus more on their career as compared to other couples as well as they can get financial benefit in their lives. Because of this reason all couples feel more happiness in their lives. What is more, without children couple become able to spend more hours at their work so, they can easily get success in their business because they have no responsibility of any children. For instance, US people are more successful as compared to other country because they are mostly prefer refer without children in their lives hence, they lives happy life. This fact is logical. If people are prefer live with children, so above benefits not for their.
On the contrary, some people counter claim the mentioned support. The formost arguments they do that, few drawbacks of without children couple. That is to say on account of the without children couple may have main hai main difficulty in their push future because when they will become old that time they not only feel alone but also that time any person would not give support in their life. In addition, they will become unemployed in future life, when can origin financial problem has to be able to effect on country's economy.
To conclude, without any doubt, this is a mixed bag. If this topic has both positive and negative point of this notion any may not be underestimated and I would like to say without children husband and wife are very happy as well as do more entertainment in the life as compared to with children couple.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for instance, in addition, as well as, first of all, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89375 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50207161768 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49375 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.9933845025 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.461538462 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6923076923 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256806289376 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114047871182 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148540049487 0.0667982634062 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151926082225 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821498877092 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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