Some people opine that parents should not allow their children to pick their own decisions about everyday matters as it will turn their children into egocentric people. Meanwhile, others believe that parents should permit them to choose their own choices because it will cause significant and positive effects to their children's growth. I agree with the latter that children should be allowed to pick their own choices on everyday matters.
On the one side, allowing children to choose their own choices can turn them into self-absorbed and egocentric people. This is because basically all humans have tendency to be egocentric. Children who have their own authority to decide by themselves will have potential to choose what is only beneficial for them, without considering others' feelings and interests, thus turning them into self-centered human being. However, these negative effects can be minimized if parents guide and monitor their children carefully when they make their own decisions.
On the other side, letting children to decide their everyday matters themselves will have significant and beneficial effects to children's growth, if they are carefully monitored by their parents. Positive traits such as maturity and independence will be learnt by children who choose their own options since they are young. This is because maturity and independence are not values that can be learnt overnight. Thus, children who are being trained to decide by themselves since young age will be able to make choices on more complex matters and not become too reliant with others when they have become adults.
In conclusion, I agree that letting children to choose their own choices about everyday matters will have significant and beneficial effects to children's growth such as maturity and independence traits, only if they are carefully monitored by their parents when making decisions. Otherwise, it will only cause negative impacts to children such as turning them into self-absorbed and egocentric people.
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 67
- the plans below show a public park when it was first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
- In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing railway lines for very fast trains between cities Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport Discuss both these vi 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 401, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to overnight'
Suggestion: to overnight
...dence are not values that can be learnt overnight. Thus, children who are being trained t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, thus, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42675159236 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63404869043 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.407643312102 0.561755894193 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4314100811 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.076923077 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349459894086 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158133333161 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982108896221 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257000264454 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815459463025 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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