There is no denying the fact the phenomenon of some people ponder that english language can very helpful in person' life,so all school are focus more on English language as compared to local language is ubiquitous, across the globe due to it is paramount importanant. this topic has numerous merites for lern english language as well as how we should try to ensure the survival of local languages, which will be elaborated in further paragraphs.
To begin with, there are many advantages of masses are learn english language. Out of all,the one to prove strongest point that, nowadays, all person are speak english language,so it's very beneficial in people's life in many ways.To explain that, if people are know about english language, when they can easily travel in foreign countries as well as they to be able to easily deal with foreign person.By that reason all people necessary to learn english language. For instance, the second number of Indian country's people are speak english language as compared to other countries,hence they can easily deal with foreign people .Thus, all people should foucs more on english language. That fact is logical.
On the contrary,the some people claim the mentioned support. The arguments formost they do that,all masses should try to ensure the survival of local languages, because our language is our culture. Apart from the,all government schools should capulsory learn to their language as well as they should more focus on their languages. Moreover, many countries should give money for learn to their language , so some people are attrect to it.
To conclude, without any doubt, in my opinion I agree with the learn english language because it's very helpful in future lives as well all masses should learn their language.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, second, so, thus, well, apart from, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09655172414 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5186635801 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493103448276 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.8397238868 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.363636364 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6363636364 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284859243053 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125957778596 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671392621554 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197016026555 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034931749867 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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