Many people nowadays prefer to travel in their own vehicles rather than public transport. This has lead to many problems like traffic and pollution. To overcome this situation, government can increase the frequency and reliability of local transport system and encourage people to use public transportation on regular basis.
A major problem of using personal cars is it leads to traffic problems in a city. People often prefer to travel through their own cars in order to reach their destination at the earliest. However, as everyone thinks the same way, it has rather caused congestion on road and made it difficult for people to travel to different places in their desired time frame. Also, with increase in vehicular traffic, it has lead to increase in air pollution as well. As vehicles are the power house of carbon emission, it has affected the air quality to a great extent.
In order to manage this situation, government interference is necessary. One possible solution is to increase the frequency of transport services especially during peak hours, so it will reduce the wait time of the traveler. Increasing buses or trains may encourage people to use public transport as it assures an individual to reach their destination on time. Also, if more people use local transportation, it will directly reduce the congestion problems as less private vehicles are being used.
In conclusion, in today's fast paced life, people are often in hurry to reach their workplace. So, they usually prefer to use their private vehicles. In order to bring down these personal vehicles off the road, government should make an easy access to the public transport by increasing its frequency and encourage citizens to use them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d made it difficult for people to travel to different places in their desired tim...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... directly reduce the congestion problems as less private vehicles are being used....
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Line 7, column 234, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'easy access'.
Suggestion: easy access
...es off the road, government should make an easy access to the public transport by increasing i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, well, in conclusion, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13829787234 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74515957853 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521276595745 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7961189054 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224154006577 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743887661915 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559647634184 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133535697105 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038240512046 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.