The given line graph compares and contrasts the data on the changes in the amount of carbon dioxide released per person in four different countries over a 40-year period.
Generally speaking, Italy and Portugal witnessed significant increases in terms of the average CO2 emissions per person, whereas the trend in the rest nations was downward.
It is clearly seen from the chart that in 1967 the English residents emitted the highest amount of carbon dioxide with about 11 tonnes and then it reduced gradually to just under 9 tonnes by the year of 2007. Besides, the figure for Sweden started at about 8.7 tonnes and experienced a remarkable growth to hit a peak of roughly 10 tonnes before declining dramatically to around 5.3 tonnes at the end of the period.
On the other hand, approximately 4.2 tonnes of Carbon dioxide produced by Italians, which was threefold as high as that by Portuguese in 1967. After that, the data in these two countries shared the same trend to reach around 5 and 7.5 tonnes, respectively in 1997, then they plateaued at somewhere these points during the last 10 years.
- The table shows the expenditure on various types of food in one European country in 1992 2002 and 2012 The amount spent on various foodstuffs in Italy millions of euros 1992 2002 2012 Beef 45 43 54 Chicken 38 41 56 Butter margarine 8 9 8 Potatoes 11 14 18 64
- writing task 1: the birth rates of China and America 73
- In developing countries children in rural communities have less access to education Some people believe that the problem can be solved by providing more schools and teachers while others think that the problem can be solved by providing computers and i 89
- Many high street shops have gone out of business in recent years Why do you think this has happened Is it a positive or negative development 84
- Some people think success in life comes from hard work and determination Others think money and appearance are more important Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, then, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8670212766 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58256047474 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63829787234 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 23.1546731544 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 152.5 112.824112599 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3333333333 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160135700152 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804345059501 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608482785055 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102016076553 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534147520728 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.2329268293 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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