In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
These days, many people attach great importance to having their own houses rather than renting accommodation. In my opinion, there are some reasons for it and the trend is a positive development.
One of the main reasons for owning a home is because some people want to improve their self-images. One is able to buy his or her house with the money they earn means that they can take care well for themselves or even their families, which may improve their standing in a society where people usually think houses are one of the necessities for an individual to have a comfortable life. For example, a boy can impress a girl and her family with the house he buys using his own salaries as this can claim that he may meet the basic needs of the girl. In other words, houses seem to be a standard to judge a human's well-being in society and as a result, they put effort to pursue them.
Personally, I strongly believe that the tendency is beneficial for both individuals and society as a whole. First, owning a house may reduce renting costs for a long time, which can minimize the financial pressure upon people. Therefore, they can have more money for fulfilling their basic necessities such as education, entertainment, or services. This means that the living standard of citizens is likely to become better and the communities may appear prosperous with satisfied people. Second, having a house means citizens do not need to mobilize as renting one. When living a rented accommodation, people often have to face the risk of continuous relocation as their life depends on landowners. Therefore, owning a home can help their life more stable and they can devote more to their work or study.
In conclusion, one of the many reasons why people prefer living in their own home rather than becoming tenants can be because of self-image improvement, and I think this is an advantageous development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...an have more money for fulfilling their basic necessities such as education, entertainment, or se...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80122324159 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71855295422 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51376146789 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2404663698 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.142857143 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260640250125 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098573693546 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690363392752 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19867160256 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566163106324 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.