You have a meeting with your manager the next day. Write a letter telling him/her what you are going to discuss in the meeting.
In your letter, you should tell:
• what you have done for the company in the year you worked there
• what changes you would like to recommend
• what training you require
Dear Mr. Shah,
I am writing to discuss about the meeting that I am going to attend with you tomorrow. I have joined your organization one year ago, and being a Marketing executive I have undergone various assignments and completed them successfully.
To begin with, I have been working on promotional activities of our product from one year; sales have been increased by 3%, which was 63% earlier. Consequently, this has happened because of the execution of the new strategies in order to retain more of the existing customers. However, there are several aspects where I would like to recommend some implementation need to be done. First, we shall hire a few more employees in marketing department as work is tremendously increasing day by day, that is why existing employees often get overburdened. Second, I reckon that we should commence promoting our products on online selling websites such as Amazon, Flipkart, and so on. This would probably help our company to reach an international market as well.
Lastly, I would also like to recommend you to organize a training session for brand management, so that I can enhance my knowledge in it and able to contribute further in our company.
I look forward to the meeting tomorrow and discuss all my points in detail.
Your’s faithfully,
Charvi Patel
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- You have a meeting with your manager the next day Write a letter telling him her what you are going to discuss in the meeting In your letter you should tell what you have done for the company in the year you worked there what changes you would like to rec 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: YOUR_S[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Your' or 'Yours'?
Suggestion: Your; Yours
...and discuss all my points in detail. Your’s faithfully, Charvi Patel
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, lastly, look, second, so, well, i reckon, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08256880734 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96903470399 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688073394495 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9704736828 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.727272727 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 4.34317383033 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231054578365 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710770964218 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057049354743 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122164399552 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663060332122 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.