A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction Do you agree or disagree Provide relevant examples if necessary.
both important if required earning or reword then
By doing meaningful and rewording is the purpose of life. According to some people's point of view, a handsome amount of money is much more crucial than being satisfied with your work. Although, being contended with your employment is the major driving force but if someone did not pay according to its experience and hard work then its almost impossible to carry out that function. In this essay, we are going to discuss both factors about the job to perform what you want and get pay accordingly.
Firstly, A good amount of money assists to meet both ends easily and effectively, which causes much more satisfaction in life. All people have their families responsibilities and personal needs. An if someone not getting enough salary, it would have a great effect on his performance. The mind will work perfectly and concentrate on work and find out more innovative ideas if another distraction-free out from thinking. For an instant, A survey conducted by Cambridge University figure out workers with high pay enjoys working while labour force remained stressed all the time.
Secondly, many people how are associated with an agricultural industry like farmers love there function but dishearten when not give enough prices of their products. When you reworded with respect to your performance than satisfaction follows it automatically. Landowners spend a lot of there profits on buying machines and fertilizers but at the end of season downed market leads to the suicide of a farmer in India in the last decade.
Other people who think liking what you want are not wrong the individuals who followed their passion are more successful than others. But, such things required courage and have to bear hardships which only a few have. And in my view less responsible person can only do it because one has to support his family less likely take that risk.
In conclusion, each has it's on perspective either to do work for money or have a specific vision to perform a job. Some people argue that huge salaries are more important than the purpose of employment. I agree with the side of big salary which brings happiness afterwards.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 213, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...s and personal needs. An if someone not getting enough salary, it would have a great ef...
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Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t give enough prices of their products. When you reworded with respect to your perfo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, as to, in conclusion, in my view, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95810055866 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73989884124 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614525139665 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0445239485 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6111111111 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192658898141 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595887808976 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570292545643 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105530726439 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600150857191 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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