The diagram below illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summaries the information by reporting main feature and make comparison where possible.
The flow chart below outline complete procedure that apply for manufacturing of bricks used in construction.
summarization of seven stage process which starts from raw clay to development into bricks shape. These then solidified, packed and transported at the developmental site.
The bricks manufacturing process initiate with digging of ground to supply clay for formation by aid of heavy machines called digger. Second step also machine supported which consist of rollers and metal grid to homogenize it and remove solid material. In third step water and sand mixed into clay to form paste, and to bring into shape special moulds utilized and wire cutter to create bricks of same size.
The next two steps are drying in multiple chambers, firstly bricks place in drying oven where it remain for 24-48 hours. Then transfer to three chamber kiln where temperature is different, initially burn at moderate temperature of 200-940 degree. After that in high temperature compartment where temperature is 840-1300C. After complete drying next proceeding is cooling, in its chamber, bricks stay in heating and cooling process for 24-48 hours. At the end when whole bunch of bricks manufacture packed and transport and deliver at building place.
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| 2021-04-10 | Farwa Nasir | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'charts'.
Suggestion: charts
The flow chart below outline complete procedure that a...
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Line 4, column 97, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'remains'?
Suggestion: remains
...ly bricks place in drying oven where it remain for 2448 hours Then transfer to three c...
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Line 4, column 150, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kiln' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kilns'.
Suggestion: kilns
...48 hours Then transfer to three chamber kiln where temperature is different initiall...
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Line 4, column 453, Rule ID: WHOLE_LOT[1]
Message: Use simply 'bunch'.
Suggestion: bunch
... process for 2448 hours At the end when whole bunch of bricks manufacture packed and transp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23979591837 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64423079107 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622448979592 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 196.0 22.4926829268 871% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1027.0 112.824112599 910% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 196.0 22.9334400587 855% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 49.0 5.23603664747 936% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186823663232 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186823663232 0.103423049105 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117009878997 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564718378175 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 101.3 13.2329268293 766% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -127.46 61.2550243902 -208% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 79.7 10.3012195122 774% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.3 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.06 8.06136585366 212% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 11.4329268293 516% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 80.4 10.9970731707 731% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 80.0 11.0658536585 723% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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