Both the author of the essay and the lecturer's statements revolve around whether putting high taxes on cigarrests are beneficial or not. Regarding the passage, the author profoundly believes that there are three plausible hypotheses ahich alltogether attest that these action could have vast amount of benefits for the whole society. However, the professor calls all the mentioned claims into questions since they lack enough evidence to be considered credible. In fact, the professor believes that these reasons have downsides and addresses, in detail, the trouble with each point made in the reading text.
First and foremost, the author of the essay states that rasing taxes on cigarettes leads people to buy less of them. The professor repudiates this fallacious belief by referring to more strong evidence. According to the lecturer, these penalty can encourage people to buy cheaper cigarettes with more harmful ingredients. Additionally, she goes on to say that this action is like putting taxes on unhealthy food, in that occasion people not only buy more fastfood but also have less money in their pockets for healthy ones. So this hypothesis is excluded and not convincing.
Another hypothesis presented by the essayist , hold the idea that taxes are financially fair both for cigarette consumers and others. While it is not adequate to prove that the rest of the society can run away from this burden . Nevertheless, the orator explicitly addresses this point when she states that by doing these reaction to unhealthy habbits, we attack all segments of society with various income the same. In the other words, people with lower income will be financially putted under a severe pressure while others don't. Thus the secound claim is also ruled out as the result of more decisive fact which offered by the professor.
Finally, the author brings up his arguments to a close by suggesting that taxes can provide an enormuse source of income for the government. While he actually ignores the fact that when this occurance happen, the government is more likely to be reluctant on preventing people from unhealthy habbits. Not surprisingly, the lecturer takes issue with this claim by contending that the repercussion of this merit such as ignoring the policies can be dangerous for the whole society. Consequensly, this hypothesis is also based on wrong reasoning.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this action' or 'these actions'?
Suggestion: this action; these actions
...ypotheses ahich alltogether attest that these action could have vast amount of benefits for ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 231, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this penalty' or 'these penalties'?
Suggestion: this penalty; these penalties
...ng evidence. According to the lecturer, these penalty can encourage people to buy cheaper cig...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...her hypothesis presented by the essayist , hold the idea that taxes are financiall...
^^
Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oth for cigarette consumers and others. While it is not adequate to prove that the re...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...he society can run away from this burden . Nevertheless, the orator explicitly add...
^^
Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this reaction' or 'these reactions'?
Suggestion: this reaction; these reactions
...his point when she states that by doing these reaction to unhealthy habbits, we attack all seg...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 527, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ed under a severe pressure while others dont. Thus the secound claim is also ruled o...
^^^^
Line 3, column 533, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...er a severe pressure while others dont. Thus the secound claim is also ruled out as ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 58, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or brings up his arguments to a close by suggesting that taxes can provide an eno...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, however, nevertheless, regarding, so, thus, while, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 22.412803532 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 30.3222958057 171% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 1373.03311258 145% => OK
No of words: 382.0 270.72406181 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20680628272 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6666653951 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 145.348785872 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570680628272 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 419.366225166 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7788120439 49.2860985944 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 110.228320801 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 21.698381199 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06452816374 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 4.45695364238 224% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324469118373 0.272083759551 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909648420308 0.0996497079465 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599836747917 0.0662205650399 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1993929126 0.162205337803 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516805966042 0.0443174109184 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.42419426049 109% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 63.6247240618 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this action' or 'these actions'?
Suggestion: this action; these actions
...ypotheses ahich alltogether attest that these action could have vast amount of benefits for ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 231, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this penalty' or 'these penalties'?
Suggestion: this penalty; these penalties
...ng evidence. According to the lecturer, these penalty can encourage people to buy cheaper cig...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...her hypothesis presented by the essayist , hold the idea that taxes are financiall...
^^
Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oth for cigarette consumers and others. While it is not adequate to prove that the re...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...he society can run away from this burden . Nevertheless, the orator explicitly add...
^^
Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this reaction' or 'these reactions'?
Suggestion: this reaction; these reactions
...his point when she states that by doing these reaction to unhealthy habbits, we attack all seg...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 527, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ed under a severe pressure while others dont. Thus the secound claim is also ruled o...
^^^^
Line 3, column 533, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...er a severe pressure while others dont. Thus the secound claim is also ruled out as ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 58, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or brings up his arguments to a close by suggesting that taxes can provide an eno...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, however, nevertheless, regarding, so, thus, while, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 22.412803532 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 30.3222958057 171% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 1373.03311258 145% => OK
No of words: 382.0 270.72406181 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20680628272 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6666653951 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 145.348785872 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570680628272 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 419.366225166 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7788120439 49.2860985944 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 110.228320801 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 21.698381199 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06452816374 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 4.45695364238 224% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324469118373 0.272083759551 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909648420308 0.0996497079465 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599836747917 0.0662205650399 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1993929126 0.162205337803 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516805966042 0.0443174109184 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.42419426049 109% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 63.6247240618 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.