In these days countries around the world are globally connected with each other paving way for the establishment of a cross social platform having a variety of ethnicity and culturally different people. The main reason behind this is the globalization and the advent of new technology worldwide. Though there are many advantage of having a mixture of races together, there are a few limitations that can affect the country.
One of the main reason that can be perceived behind such existence can be attributed to the breakthrough in technological advancements. Advancement in commuting have shrunk the world and connected people from various origins together. Primitive transportation modes have been replaced by advanced mode like aero planes, metro trains, private jets, helicopters which has made the opportunity for people to travel to even the remote parts of the world. The other reason that can be observed is the job opportunities that are available for various sectors globally. People migrate to other countries for better livelihood and recognition. For example, Canada and Australia invites people from all over the world to work in the relevant fields by extending them a Permanent Residence visa. It can be seen that there are scarcity in population in few places around the world, and countries immigrates people for a better manpower. Seeking people from various countries offers benefits in terms of development economically and financially. It brings in a better cash flow through foreign exchange. Cultural collaborations can even aid the country to develop compassion towards other nations and avoid hostility in most of the terrible situations.
However, there are certain shortcomings. Permitting people from various countries to infiltrate the indigenous population can create a shortage of jobs for the natives. This can lead to few malefic behavior from the locales. For instance, there was a racial killing happening in Australia around 2005, where Indians were killed for bagging the opportunities from the native Australians. Proliferations from various races can change the culture of the people drastically over a stipulated period of time. For example, the tradition of Halloween is new to India and is slowly attracting the younger generations to get more inclined toward the Halloween culture rather than embracing the local Diwali celebrations. In fact, it can lead to the replacement of local occasions with internationally recognized celebrations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 314, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many advantages'.
Suggestion: many advantages
... technology worldwide. Though there are many advantage of having a mixture of races together, ...
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Line 3, column 488, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...he people drastically over a stipulated period of time. For example, the tradition of Hallowee...
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Line 3, column 817, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nternationally recognized celebrations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in fact, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2104.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47916666667 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06504553364 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546875 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8559296221 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.2 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303956341297 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886929772409 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524134867465 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207239071318 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248235628269 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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