Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It's said that human has an excessive number of choices than ever before. In this essay, some particular information will be provided
in order to claim that I totally agree with the mentioned statement.
Thanks to human's development in every aspects, especially in technology and science, many inventions were made to improve our lifes. For instance, as more people are concerning about enviromental issues, there have been numerous efforts in introducing new renewable resources, along with reuseable materials. That means nowadays people can choose how their powers are produced, even in personally
independent way or depending on power companies. The world is developing dramatically, therefore people can use various ways for a single problem as a lot of equipments were made for a wide range of solutions
In addition, since the markets enable so many cheap and accesible things, choices are unlimited. Many people are surprised at the number of chanels a TV can have, or the number of courses students can take online. Choices are made due to human's purposes and needs; however, it may become too much. For example, a child might sit in front of the screen for a couple of hours but she still could not find her favourite film, as she's drown by an excessive number of recommendations, because films are produced and advertised every day in a world where anyone can make film just with a modern camera or a small smartphone. In comparison to 30 years ago, when smartphones weren't available and people still used heavy equipments and the making-film process was complicated, we can clearly see that we are provided with a big movie industry these days.
In conclusion, it can't be denied that human is advantageous with a wide range of choices nowadays to compare with in the past. Choices are availabe in various factors and they can either benefit or harm us in particular ways.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01904761905 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79891279328 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638095238095 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.5811327642 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.75 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219436121726 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076308234225 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449608777239 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107689095748 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429666405984 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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