Some people think the news has no real connection to people's lives, so reading newspapers for watching used programs on television is a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?
It is believed by a few masses that watching the news on television or reading newspapers is a complete waste of their valuable time, as news is not truly connected to individuals lives. However, I strongly disagree with this notion, because these days news is one of the powerful sources of information and guiding millions of people.
To begin with, news telecasted by news channels play a significant role in today's contemporary era. In other words, these sources provide every bit of information that is happening around the world, which could be very useful for individuals. Also, a person would be able to protect himself whenever he listens to the news on something bad that is happening across the city. For example, special news on night time crimes, so that people would be more aware of themselves whenever they go out alone at night. Hence, the news is incredibly important for a person's well being.
Moving ahead, not only news programmes on television are worth watching, but the newspapers are also one of the reliable sources of information. In fact, it is quite common in the older generation, owing to their interest in reading stories and articles. Also, they are more likely to relate the news to their own experiences. Moreover, newspapers combine news from local, national and international level and give it in a bunch of papers. Thus, reading the newspaper is valuable over other redundant activities.
In conclusion, I opine by saying that irrefutably news is providing widespread knowledge on the activities that are done by people and making people aware of their surroundings. So, it is worth watching and one should definitely know about them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...isagree with this notion, because these days news is one of the powerful sources of ...
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Line 3, column 554, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
...e, the news is incredibly important for a persons well being. Moving ahead, not only n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05755395683 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81183624399 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589928057554 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6031615497 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.428571429 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272559488583 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839076263443 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594918819373 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160206141631 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341880086356 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.